Correct the letter to the editor + Suggestions for improvement, please

Minecraft Lisa

Pigmanstrasse 13

1542 Nether

The standard

Front customs office street 13

1030 Vienna

Unterlamm, 01.01.2019

Subject: "WHAT PARENTS TELL ON THE INTERNET ABOUT YOUR CHILDREN" on pages 23 and 24 in the "Der Standard" from 01.01.2019

Dear Ladies and Gentlemen of the editors of Der Standard,

With the utmost interest, one of her readers read her article "WHAT PARENTS ON THE INTERNET TELL ABOUT HER CHILDREN". The topic of this article concerns the privacy and privacy of children whose parents disclose sensitive information on the Internet.

Lots of pictures and other sensitive data would be revealed on the Internet, for example in Internet forums, as well as various social media platforms, mostly Face Book.

In today's modern times, privacy is more important than ever. Only one posted image originally owned by another can lead to an ad. Even if you do not appear, you should never disclose data such as pictures or other sensitive information about a person if the person is hurt, offended, or that person is against publication. Consequences such as bullying are common and should by no means be underestimated.

As you have already stated in your article, a large proportion of mothers and fathers (more than half in mothers and about a third in fathers) spread sensitive data, which has many disadvantages for children in later life. As an average teenager, I think parents are a role model for their children, which is why I'm not particularly excited about this unauthorized behavior. I myself would be deeply disappointed by my parents if you were to match those parents.

Of course, you have also indicated the benefits of publishing data, which in my opinion are so insignificant that you should leave the posting the same.

In their article, I have missed an important request to parents before committing the same mistake as other guardians before them: Take good care of what you publish and whether it could have any consequences, such as bullying for the child in the worst case scenario.

Yes, you can do that. But many parents make Facebook "only friends", so it is not completely public.

I find the whole hype anyway exaggerated. A baby photo, or a photo of the training that the parents have posted times, I find quite okay.
But e.g. Holiday photos, party photos, etc. Should not without consent in social media.

You've done very well. It lacks a few commas. And sometimes the sentence structure is a bit crazy - but you can easily correct that with a second reading.